Shot Feedback

Ed_0010

Heyhey, 

I would love some feedback on my shot, it still pretty early and think I could use some fresh eye on it 

https://www.syncsketch.com/playground/634cbd4bf3704820b3e564ce06eaad13#620222/546740

Thanks

Ed 

WeatherMan

I actually really like this, but you're missing a huge opportunity to have the monster fall over all the way onto the ground instead of just slumping! Also it would help to add some FX to the gun otherwise it's hard to understand what your hero is actually doing at first glance.

Ed_0010

@WeatherMan Yeah, I plan to add some FX when the shot is finished and I think you're right dude I might have to have him hit the ground. Thanks for the feedback dude!