My only comment is he's very off balance at the end. You can either have him swing his back leg over to catch his weight, or simply shift him screen left a bit.
What WeatherMan said. Also I would twist with the hips slightly before the upper body. Also the right foot slides a bit. It may look better as a slight step?
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