Norman_Throw_The_Ball

pascalie

hi guys 

feedback are welcome

https://syncsketch.com/playground/34243bd5fc514134b2ddc657c7b0e214#596232/522739

https://youtu.be/xJF6vefU1Jk

WeatherMan

My only comment is he's very off balance at the end. You can either have him swing his back leg over to catch his weight, or simply shift him screen left a bit.

BrandonBerryCG

What WeatherMan said. Also I would twist with the hips slightly before the upper body. Also the right foot slides a bit. It may look better as a slight step?

pascalie

ok thank is true i'll fix that

https://syncsketch.com/playground/1011ffb86fb74b9e9e6c2da1c3179c9e#597703/524210

pascalie

new  update

https://syncsketch.com/playground/bd7f6dbc931c482c83e03e366eea3acb#599075/525582