I'd suggest breaking the symmetry in a few places. Like the big veins on his legs shouldn't be exactly the same. Little tweaks to the abs.Some toes sitting lopsided or bent. Then, if you take the move brush really large and just make the smallest little adjustments on a large scale -- like make him slouch just a little with one shoulder -- I think our eyes pick up these slight deviations and it makes it feel different. There is beauty in symmetry, but I don't think this guy is meant to be beautiful at all.
Might also consider softening his forms somewhat. Give a sense that he has thick, leathery skin, maybe a little fat in some places -- this may help it feel even more believable.
@BIGTIMEMASTER ahhh man you're right definately isn't supposed to be beautiful! i'll try to break up the forms and add variations since i see now i went a bit too far wwith the anatomy and ended up with 0% body fat lol i appreciate the feedback!!
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Is he gonna be low poly'ed and textured?
Might also consider softening his forms somewhat. Give a sense that he has thick, leathery skin, maybe a little fat in some places -- this may help it feel even more believable.