Feedback animation

stop00pots

Hey guys!
I am currently working on an animation of this scene, and please i need you opinon and critique
Thank you very much!

Here is a link to syncsketch https://syncsketch.com/sketch/3d8fcfdfb68a/

Archanex

Nice use of reference stop00pots, I left you a few notes on SS

stop00pots

Thank you so much Archanex. I will try to change it as fast as possible .