feedback and suggestion

AFsoft

hello to you. 
it is all about a project i am working on, my intention is to do more animation for my own thoughts, ideas or things i couldn't do before. 
the project i am working on is an animation which i actually have the music in the background, sang by EBI (Ebrahim Hamedi) persian music star named "NAVAZESH".
in this project there is a girl that dances with her love and something happens that the singer is pointing to the story of the girl. (some parts are edited by my self to make it more sad).
some cuts that i have made in unity and 3ds max : (ignore names and etc) 
https://youtu.be/0zN5wP7xRzA
https://youtu.be/vubnWFZ-424

i need suggestions, what do you think about it, how can i be better at it, what would you do to make it better? 

AFsoft

i expected to get some attention. here is what i did all by my self :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nxb8kpCUNGw

Archanex

Congrats on finishing your project AFsoft, are you looking for praise or critique on the animation? It feels like the focus isn't really on the animation as it's mostly slow moving cameras with little bits of animation sprinkled in

AFsoft

Archanex said:

Congrats on finishing your project AFsoft, are you looking for praise or critique on the animation? It feels like the focus isn't really on the animation as it's mostly slow moving cameras with little bits of animation sprinkled in

Thank you. I want artists have a look on my work just that and get the feedback. I am not an animator, I love to produce short animated movies or in other words love to direct. praise or critique is not what i want, is what others do based on my work and their opinions. 
About animations, yes it was a new experience using bipeds for interaction between 2 bipeds. using ik solvers and etc..
slow camera movements is cause the song is super emotional.