Concentration Critique

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Hey guys, I did this in Maya 2018 and touched it up in Photoshop. I feel like it could use some improvement, but I don't know how. Any advice? 

Brian "Panda" Choi

I can't tell what you're going for.

It looks moody.

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Oh, whoops! Yeah, probably shoulda mentioned that xD

For the tone I'm aiming for, I wanted something that was a blend between Cyberpunk and ominous mystery (like aliens or something). I also sprinkled a little bit of AKIRA in there with the floating rubble and checkered floor.