sorry for previous link, Kindly feedback Thanks (Animation)

AnimaJoe

Hi, I am new here and this is my 1st post here. I made an animation and I just want feedback on it so i can improve it. trying to walk my way up so i can start creating my own projects and share fun ideas to the world. sorry for taking up your time and i truly  appreciate the effort. 

link below 

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/cca41f9fe85d/