Custom MP7 (need criticism)

VascoRodrigues

Hello polycounters ! This is my first post here, so don't kill me yet
For the past few days I've been working on this mp7. I am right now in the texturing phase, and to be honest, I hate my texturing. I'm not doing it out of a concept so I am totally lost now, it looks horrible, so I feel sorry for your eyes
I really want to improve my skills, but on artstation no one gives feed back so I thought I should try here too .. therefore I would like some feedback so I know what problems I should be going after. Being self thought is weird. 

Cheers !

jakemoyo

Dude I dont know what youre talking about, this looks damn good to me. My critiques would probably be that wrap on the bottom looks like it could use some work, it looks a little cartoony compared to the rest of the model, and that rust-red wire going around the gun, I'd alter that material. If its supposed to be rusty: i dont know why, the rest of the gun is pristine; if its not supposed to be rusty well then I'm not sure what it is  because thats what it looks like. Other than that though it looks pretty good dude! Keep up the good work!

VascoRodrigues

Thank you both for your very opposite feedback Although it was nice to hear good feedback, I was looking forward to getting the harsher feedback from joshua. I will definitely consider a deeper look at the design choices, even though the polymer material was put intentionally as I didn't like the metal look.
As for the clean damage look and the work for the wrap, I agree, I have to try and improve it. 
Cheers guys

jakemoyo

I try to be supportive cause i know my critique is coming from a place of ignorance as well. Haha