Finishing Attack

BencherwinkaAnimator · Oct 2018

Hey everyone, i'm quite new here so let me know if what i'm doing is proper etiquette. Anyways i'd love any critique on this piece i'm finishing up.
Thanks!
http://syncsketch.com/sketch/03a6f6b2536b/#529315

Veech · Oct 2018

I really like the exaggeration you have going on, I'd say maybe anticipate a bit more before the jump to sell the weight a bit more.

BrandonBerryCG · Oct 2018

I could have sworn I replied to this one back when you originally posted! Sorry! You have some strong movements in there, I really like this piece. One thing I would suggest looking at would be that the sword momentum comes to an abrupt stop in the 24-27 range. Try to smooth out that arc into the next attack better and you will be in a good spot!

BencherwinkaAnimator · Oct 2018

Thanks for the replies! I agree with you both on the antic crits. I'll definitely tweak that area a bunch as well as add a better pose for the initial antic pose

Blendermonkey · Oct 2018

Left you some more notes on poses and movement.

Finishing Attack

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