Hey guys so I finally have some spare time and I have always wanted to tackle a project this big for awhile and I have a passion for Cyberpunk and well I wanted to create a scene.
So far I have managed to make a cup C&C is always welcome!
very low poly with PBR Texture do not mix so well. In my opinion do not Sci-Fi things just because it is in a Sci-Fi Scene. Try to model some High Poly Models and Bake them.
Hm yea after some thought I think the table is way off and a bit on the crappy side a example of a idea that didn't really translate to paper, so I think I will redo the whole table as it doesn't match the theme and looks way to blocky!
ah nice i am digging the mood boards im going to echo what @priderice said earlier take some time with these models really focus on the look and feel of each piece i love how you are implementing glowy bits into the models but if i take this table for example It feels kinda off you have a smooth with nice transition edges on the table stand/legs and the table bit itself has extremely sharp edges a simple bevel on these edges would help this piece alot
also think of what materials this stuff is made of and really try to push that in the material Right now it doesnt really read as anything....the table base reads as like a chrome or polished steel.
@Cglewis After having a sec to step away and come back to my work I do have to agree the table wasn't the best looking and looks very much rushed hopefully I can fix that for the models to come.
Nice that is looking alot better!!! I would tighten up those chamfers/Bevels a bit that will help you get a nice crisp edge if that is the look you are going for
I feel like it needs some over head lighting also the hand rails are feeling cyber punky to me....the whole steps area feels very normal and not cyber punky so its a bit jarring i would push that more.....aslo i would play around with some different tables....
Are you going for a cyber punk bar set in some dystopian future or Are you going for a bar in 2018 that has cyber punk vibes?
Hey, I has been awhile since I have updated this but atlass I am back into it and working toward finishing this project! hope you like!! stay around for regular updates.
I feel like the glowing bottles are a bit much. Crystal blue might fit the scene more, maybe with a few bottles bottom lit. Also not sure about the use of green: maybe decide on a colour scheme?
I feel like the glowing bottles are a bit much. Crystal blue might fit the scene more, maybe with a few bottles bottom lit. Also not sure about the use of green: maybe decide on a colour scheme?
Thanks for the feedback! taking into consideration what you said I changed it abit and I must say in my opion it does look better!
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This is a Table I whipped up!
Thanks for the feedback!
So here is a shelf that would be behind the bar that will hold the bottles of alcohol not to sure if too many lights or not opinions?
If you haven't yet, I would scour the net for concepts of futuristic cyberpunk bars and try to get some inspiration from them.
this would help us give you some feed back.
So here is the revisited version of the table.
take some time with these models really focus on the look and feel of each piece
i love how you are implementing glowy bits into the models but if i take this table for example
It feels kinda off you have a smooth with nice transition edges on the table stand/legs and the table bit itself has extremely sharp edges
a simple bevel on these edges would help this piece alot
also think of what materials this stuff is made of and really try to push that in the material
Right now it doesnt really read as anything....the table base reads as like a chrome or polished steel.
But keep on chipping away man
Thank you heaps though for the feedback!
#updated table
I would tighten up those chamfers/Bevels a bit that will help you get a nice crisp edge if that is the look you are going for
here is a Update a bar stool! still not 100% on it though.
Are you going for a cyber punk bar set in some dystopian future
or
Are you going for a bar in 2018 that has cyber punk vibes?
C&C are always welcome!!!