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Akira Fanart: Bar Entrance

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A replica of the bar entrance seen in the 1988 anime film Akira

Hope you guys enjoy it

Software: Maya, Substance Painter, Photoshop, Renderman 22

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  • MarcoAntonio
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    MarcoAntonio polycounter lvl 6
  • CybranM
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    CybranM interpolator
    Its a nitpick but the soda cans are the wrong shape. The cans in the movie have flat sides like this:

  • Biomag
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    Don't show wireframes if you didn't optimize the meshes. Rug, tapes, wood, sign,... all of those have obviously edges that add nothing to the shape and without seeing the textures I can only guess, but I still think that a most of the edges in this scene can be deleted. There are many things that you could actually do with textures and don't require meshes (tapes on sign for example) to improve optimization.

    Overall I like the result, but you could push a couple of things to get closer to the reference, like bigger graffiti. Also the scene has a more blueish tone in the lighting.
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