11 second club challenge, please need critique!
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Hey guys! I am working on this shot, with the clip given by 11 seconds club for the September challenge. Although I have not finished the whole audio I would love some feedback for the blocking that I have. Thank you very much for your time!! 
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/aab69df71a2b/#517497
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/aab69df71a2b/#517497