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(Wip) Any tips on woman face?

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  • carvuliero
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    Maybe reduce angle view to 28-30 or remove it at all while posting for critiques ,head have lot of prospective distortion right now , also post front, side and 3/4 views
    Do you have reference for such type of lips they look weird , nose look too short

  • Sleem
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    Sleem polycounter lvl 3
    This is really good! The only things I notice are that the tails of the eyebrows could be more pointy, and the corners of the mouth could be less wide. The neck could also be a bit thicker. Her eye makeup is so pretty and I love the nose ring and shape of the nose 
  • Stefmon
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    Stefmon polycounter lvl 8
    Zoom out a little and get some screens from all angles. Go to the Draw menu > Angle of view (I think) and set it to 30. That will give a more natural FOV. snipFrom what I can see it's lookin' neat.

    I think the ears being missing is throwing me off. Even if covered, they would leave a bump or something behind a tight hood like that. Check out this image. She's left her ears out of the hood but if she covered them with a hood as tight as yours their shape would still be visible. 

    Also the crease around the lower lip could do with softening, I think. It's a bit too crisp.

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