(WIP) Forest + Robot...

perrivince

This is my current progress on a Forest scene that I've been working on for the Vegetation and Plants for Games, CGMA course with Jeremy Huxley. I have a few things I want to get into the scene in the next week, Robot head is a placeholder still - but C&C welcome! 

FreneticPonies

I'm confused about the stylization here. The head looks smooth and cartoonish, very reminicent of The Iron Giant. The rest of the assets are far more detailed and real looking.

perrivince

@FreneticPonies Ya the Head is still just placeholder. I'm hoping to get that done this week, or maybe next, but it should match the rest of the scene when its all done. Thanks

perrivince

A bit of an update. I got a quick pass of the Robot head in, I think it will probably change a bit.
EDIT: image not attaching... I'll try again later. 

perrivince

Got it... Update.

perrivince

Almost Done.

Brian "Panda" Choi

Given the focal point of the whole environment, I find it ineffective with the foreground being lit that hard compared to the robot head. I would, if only relatively, make sure that the light around or from the robot head is harsh and strong to lead the eyes to there.

perrivince

Hey Brian I can't reply to you because you have spaces in your name and it just doesn't work... But thanks, ya I kind of tried to do that in my latest update with red light on the ground leading there. Maybe still too subtle.... the head itself may need to be brighter...

FreneticPonies

What an odd, neat art style it's ended up as. The closer in shots reveal a kind of, advanced Borderlands esque stuff? I rather hope this is something like what Borderlands 3 will end up as, cause it looks neat!

Would agree that the only thing that's missing is perhaps tweaked lighting. Did a, attempt at subtle, paintover for some suggestions:

Arasharefue4

Fine
fog has been used in a good way

perrivince

@FreneticPonies Thanks! Ya I did want to get some light shafts in there, So a bit of an update.

perrivince

Updated a bit of lighting and a few other small things.. 

perrivince

I think this is the Final...

Skinner3D

Looks good, but I think it is kind of weird that the giant's eyes are glowing even though he has moss growing on him