Fogmourn Saloon

VincentHalman

Hee there! I've just finished my saloon these days I thought it would be cool to also share it with you guys, any criticism, tips & feedback is welcome. Always try to improve my work ! 

For more images/videos you can find it also at Artstation:
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/WyR3D 

7bajwa

Hey!!! Finally!! Great!! it's looking good.
All I will say is that work a little on lighting. Add some AO to the chairs. don't leave anything black or very dark like around piano. That yellow light I am not sure where from its coming. you can darken it up or you can show bounce back light. Front look so good. Only thing is it's not visible. The background is more lit and we want more focus on the front.
Just update the light and move on. Spend enough time to polish it then move to your next dream project.
Keep up.
Bajwa

VincentHalman

7bajwa said:

Hey!!! Finally!! Great!! it's looking good.
All I will say is that work a little on lighting. Add some AO to the chairs. don't leave anything black or very dark like around piano. That yellow light I am not sure where from its coming. you can darken it up or you can show bounce back light. Front look so good. Only thing is it's not visible. The background is more lit and we want more focus on the front.
Just update the light and move on. Spend enough time to polish it then move to your next dream project.
Keep up.
Bajwa

Thanks for your great tips! I always struggle with the lighting XD, should be my next focus to get better with . 

7bajwa

Glad I could help.
Here is some lighting tutorial that will help you a lot. I learned the basics from it only.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=grN5Yd55UIM&list=PLqfZolvobgUDAm-c41cDR8NDA79UKuN4b
He has more lighting tutorials on his channel. 
- Bajwa