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Ahmeat

<span class="post-color-blue"><i><b><span class="post-color-gray"><code><h2 class="Quote post-text-align-left"><i><b><span class="post-color-gray"><span class="post-color-gray">I use Pivot Animator, I am obviously fully new so this is my first animation I ever made, I would love to have your feedback it will help a LOT.</span></span></b></i></h2>

WeatherMan

You've got a good start. Focus on the fundamentals. Read Animators Survival Kit and Illusion of Life cover to cover. Good luck on your animation journey! Stick with it and it's worth every second (:

Green_Cheek_Conure

One thing I really like about your animation is that it's clear whats going on. I can watch the scene and fully understand whats suppose to be happening in it. And even get a sense of a small basic story in it. 

That's something not all animators actually achieve surprisingly.

That's a fantastic stepping stone to have when getting into the world of animation. 

I would say the next step for you to do now is learn the fundamentals. Learn the fundamentals and watch allot and allot of animation you admire. Watch it and analyze it. Go frame by frame and try to study at what they are doing. And see if you are brave enough to try it out for yourself.

Ahmeat

Thank you so much for your feedback. i really appreciate it and ill try to improve and post more animations