[WIP] Eryn - the firefly

seimax · Jul 2018

hi guys,
'beginning a new stylized semi-realist character , based on a concept done by cheunchin , trying to take it to my style.

concept :
https://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2018/29/6/1532163641-eryn-edited.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/dx/8h4t5vxqcuv0.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/it/v1flfkc9q8ym.jpg

Feel free to gve your feedback !
i'll keep this thread active as much as i can.

seimax · Aug 2018

some updates !:

https://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2018/35/6/1535797695-untitled-5547.jpg
https://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2018/35/6/1535797695-untitled-5548.jpg

it seems that i can't upload images sooo here's some links

comment and critique welcome !

seimax · Sep 2018

test

HarlequinWerewolf · Sep 2018

Looking good, I don't know why you can't upload images though, strange...

Anyway, I love the short design but I would say that whatever is on her legs is getting lost right now in the render. I would maybe bulk up the shapes a little, or sharpen up the design. Can't wait to see more.

seimax · Sep 2018

hey @LeahM thanks for your feedback

good call ! i'm gonna make the stockings a bit thicker so they can be more defined in the final render.

(there was a small bug with pictures hosting on polycount , should be fine now)

seimax · Oct 2018

some updates

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/8h/dbj8bl7rar34.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/ub/7u5vm4u0no9m.jpg

kanga · Oct 2018

Real nice work. The feet are a little strange tho.

Dypnotic · Oct 2018

Looks really nice overall. Her chest piece is a little tight at the top even though the strings are pulling on the bottom. I think it would be better if the strings would be tighter and the top of the piece were looser.

seimax · Oct 2018

hey guys , first of all thanks for your advices !

@kanga , yup got similar review about the feet especially near the heel (the arch ? bridge ? don't know how to say it in english ) gonna work more on this , thanks for bringing this issue up !

@Dypnotic interesting view , gonna try what you said to see if it looks better ! thanks !

seimax · Nov 2018

more updates :

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/sw/m0ca925scwpr.jpg

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seimax · Nov 2018

hey folks!
so i've made a bunch of tweaks and remade certain things , ' lot of sculpt of facial features, anatomy, foots etc , hopefully it looks much better now.

i'm basically polishing the high poly until it looks just like i want !

as usual, please feel free to critic anything that bother your eyes !
take care.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/it/vvbg40ual0z8.jpg

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Tits · Nov 2018

Looking good!

seimax · Nov 2018

hey thanks a lot @Tits !

seimax · Jan 2019

baking done !

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/lc/3wmdmta8v0i6.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/ck/p110tpv5ztdg.jpg

seimax · Jan 2019

work in progress for the texture , if you see something that displease your eyes , or have advices on were i should be going or some tips , feel free to share them !