Character Temper Development (feedback much appreciated)

fleroshi

Hi all!

(and first of all - sorry for language,  i'm not native english speaker)

I'm trying to establish character's temper and his backstory.
So in that way my animations would have that life and backstory behind the character.

I choose to work with Kiel Figgins' deadpool character (you can find it here http://www.3dfiggins.com/Store/ )

I have played a little with geometry: now he has a beard, badass collar,shoulderpad,black eye (asymmetry ftw!) and leggings (just material, no new geo)
Meet - Ludovic!


Backstory:
He is around 34 years old
He lives in alternative modern era world (same as ours, but in fantasy setting)
Back in the days he was in a criminal group called "Swift Dogs" - a merciless group of free runners who used their agility to rob companies.
But at some point violance become overwhelming for Ludovic and he decided to leave his gang
Now he lives in a wild as a hermit and practicing religious doctrine.
In his world religion has a physical manifestation - it can harm or heal.
So Ludovic is kinda free runner priest now.
Because of his sins and sudden anger attacks, Ludovic practicing self-torturing, which keeps him stay concentrated. Thats why he wears that collar.

I made some poses to describe his temper:


Same poses (and references) but with different angles you can find here https://www.pinterest.ru/fleroshi/ludovic/

Next i want to make some walk/run cycles, idle's.
There is going to be another character - a demon dog (https://gumroad.com/l/firewolf), which will represent Ludovic's worst fears.

Thanks for taking your time!

I hope you, guys, like this idea!
Let me know if i should continue to post development.
Any ideas / opinions / feedback on those poses are VERY APPRECIATED!