Monkey and Wolf King Illustration Crit

Dezzipixels

Hey Everyone!

Got a new illustration commission finished and turned in so wanted to get some postmortem feed back on the piece so I know what to look out for and keep in mind for the next one. Thanks in advance for the help, you guys are the best ^^. 

 

EVF

Lovely tones and I like the characters design and composition!
I would separate the two characters a little more, and carve the clouds in a softer manner.
Maybe some different material response, everything looks like it's the same material almost
looking fwd to your next piece!

Dezzipixels

@EVF Thaanks for the feed baack!! Those dang clouds XD, yeah their edges should be a little bit softer. Definitely agree about the material pass on this, its still my weakest area and definitely could have benefited from some more love. Definitely all good points to keep in mind for the next piece. Thanks again for the feed back!!!