The only critique I have is that the perspective seems a tad bit off in the architecture especially when compared with the harps. Also the size of the harps seem to be competing a lot with architecture since they are a similar sizes on the page. Smaller harps I think would help with the composition and with defining a more clear focal point . I would even play with knocking back the architecture a little bit by adding a little bit more atmospheric perspective between the foreground and mid ground.
Hope that helps, absolutely love the texture detail, shape design, and color of the piece ^^.
Hey @Dezzipixels ! thanks for your feedback! I fought a long fight with the size relation of the harps vs huts... But I do like the cradle movement I created between the two. Also yes I agree, I could have increased the atmospheric perspective on the huts. toward the end I started being blind to what was going on, even ctrl Y wasn't helping Thanks again! Cheers
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The only critique I have is that the perspective seems a tad bit off in the architecture especially when compared with the harps. Also the size of the harps seem to be competing a lot with architecture since they are a similar sizes on the page. Smaller harps I think would help with the composition and with defining a more clear focal point . I would even play with knocking back the architecture a little bit by adding a little bit more atmospheric perspective between the foreground and mid ground.
Hope that helps, absolutely love the texture detail, shape design, and color of the piece ^^.
Also yes I agree, I could have increased the atmospheric perspective on the huts. toward the end I started being blind to what was going on, even ctrl Y wasn't helping
Thanks again!
Cheers