May I please get some feedback?

MrBramz22

Hello everyone, 

My name is Brahim and I am studying games art and animation in university. I am currently doing my final major project. Part of my project, is to develop a 3D environment. It is set in an american high school during a prom night. I am trying to get some industry feedback on my modelling and whether any improvements would need to be made. Feel free to let me know what you think of the assets which are: school bell, lockers (one open for animation purposes), Basket frame and a water fountain. Thank you very much. 

Brian "Panda" Choi

Post your images with IMGUR.  Don't attach them like you did.

Models look liek good starts, but what's the target render for these?  Are you rendering these for a game engine, a CG renderer, or something else?

LoganTMT

Hey MrBramz22,

If you want to have a good environment I might be able to help you out if you would post images of the scene.

MrBramz22

@Brian "Panda" Choi Thank you for replying. The assets that you have seen need to work in a game environment. I am trying to keep them low poly to then export them in Unreal Engine 4 where I would assemble the scene and render from there.

MrBramz22

@LoganTMT Thank you very much for the reply. I currently do not have any renders. I recently finished the dissertation that needs to be done alongside the environment. At the moment I am modelling all the assets in Maya 2017. The environment itself would consist on two areas, the corridor and the gym (where the prom is hosted). Very soon I should be ready to start assembling my scene.

Alemja

I think to get more helpful feedback we need some point of reference to refer to if we want to give you the correct kind of feedback. If you don't have a concept you're working from a mood or reference board would do wonders. We don't really know what style you're going for, we know it's a prom but a prom from the 50s is different from the 80s and is different today or the future. Your models are a good start, but we need to know more about what you want to achieve

MrBramz22

@Alemja You are absolutely right. The scene is set in the present time and I want it to look fairly realistic.