Spider-Man attack, WIP

AtomicToyRobot

Hello all,

I am currently working on this shot and am looking to get some feedback. I've been having a hard time getting some constructive notes on this so I feel kind of stuck at the moment. 

I would greatly appreciate any and all crits on how I can make this look a bit better. I'll be providing a SyncSketch link if anyone feels inclined to visually show how to improve.

Much thanks

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/c8e874c2246f/#440705

AGoodFella

Before I give any notes, maybe you can talk about what is happening in the shot. I'm a little unsure at the moment.

AtomicToyRobot

AGoodFella said:

Before I give any notes, maybe you can talk about what is happening in the shot. I'm a little unsure at the moment.

Of course, so this shot was inspired by the MvC move Maximum Spider. This isnt a 1 to 1 recreation of it I wanted to give my own spin on the idea. Basically this would be an attack for a fighting game. I still have yet to animate the 2nd character, his animation will be reactionary to the attack so I wanted the attack looking good first before moving onto the 2nd character.