MANY PIZZAS! For Pepperonic from Nowwa (WIP)

monkeydedu

Hello everyone, my name is Eduardo, I am a junior artist in 3D, I have a job to make pizzas and boxes, this will be used as a prize chest, and they have to be seen as contraband, however, there are more than 10 different pizzas, each one depends on your type is the level of weapon or prize you will have.

I would like advice on the topology, I created highpoly and lowpoly versions for each thing

PS: My English is a bit bad, and I'm sorry if it's hard to understand me.

Normal Pizza

WIREFRAME

RED PIZZA

WIREFRAME

Obscura

Hi again  The salamis and the leaves looks to be very highpoly. The salami edge doesn't need to be chamfered. The lock could be lower poly too. Overall its kinda unbalanced.

monkeydedu

HAHAHA! Hey man! How are you? okay, the salamis and the leaves are very high?

Obscura

Yep. Compared to the rest. You really only need geometry where its visible. The silhouette for example. But the salami is too small on the screen so it doesn't need the beveled edge. The leaves has a lot of inner edges that barely does anything. Try doing the same thing as what you did with the box (weld)

monkeydedu

Here the pizza more near.

Obscura

I would do the valley on the middle of the leaves with a normal map instead of geometry. Also, here are some pics of what I would do differently.

Radius based segmentation reduction:

monkeydedu

okay i understand that man! i'll fix it, look this

can I eliminate the polygons that will not be visible, example here?

Obscura

So to remove polygons covered by other geometry like the middle of the paste under the sauce on your example. Sure.

monkeydedu

Man, you won the sky! i'll fix it and reply more late, THANKS!

monkeydedu

Hey dude, look this, it is the base of the pizza

Obscura

Somewhat better. Keep in mind that you don't need edges on flat surfaces or areas that can't be seen in the silhouette. 

monkeydedu

okay perfect, and the last image could be left good? thanks very so much!