I'd keep an eye on ~0:05, the linear speed that the character climbs up the ladder kinda breaks the flow of the narrative. It'd be better for it to desperately to climb up quickly and slow to a tired stop near the top, or inversely struggle to climb up slowly before reaching the top at a desperate speed.
At ~0:07 the boomerang trajectory back to the top of the branch doesn't really click in a grounded expectation of physics, nor in a stylized exaggeration of cartoon physics. I would advise a vertical escape trajectory over a diagonal offshoot to the side.
Also I think the downtime at ~0:13 is unnecessary following the narrative of the scene. If the character is desperate to escape, then there's no need for it to hesitate before running off. And on the other hand, if it's already out of danger, there's no need for it to analyze the raptor unless it has the intention of fighting it.
https://youtu.be/ItUGTCEtihc
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At ~0:07 the boomerang trajectory back to the top of the branch doesn't really click in a grounded expectation of physics, nor in a stylized exaggeration of cartoon physics. I would advise a vertical escape trajectory over a diagonal offshoot to the side.
Also I think the downtime at ~0:13 is unnecessary following the narrative of the scene. If the character is desperate to escape, then there's no need for it to hesitate before running off. And on the other hand, if it's already out of danger, there's no need for it to analyze the raptor unless it has the intention of fighting it.
Hope that helps.