[Finished] Assassin

kizupixels

Hey guys ! I'm making my end-year school project !
I made the concept one month ago and it looks like this ;


For now it looks like this in Zbrush , I couldn't make the same proportions as the concept so it looks different




Thanks for any feedback!

OyvindAndersson

Nice work! Love the shoulder-pad and arm-gear; makes for a good silhouette.

A few things throws me off a bit:

1. The stomach muscles / the split looks wrong. They should be closer together, somewhat like the last image below here.

2. The "end" of the chest muscle seems to be too low, relative to the arm/shoulder. Just thinking, if you were to deform the mesh it would look weird in the pit between the shoulder and chest.

3. The area right below the belt could do with some more volume. Seen from the front- and side-view, he looks too thin there. Guess that could be some style thing, or skipped leg-day, but to me it looks a bit off.

4. Can't quite picture it here, but seems like the knee joint is too low / not paralell to the opposite pit?

Perhaps putting in a test-rig to check a few poses might visualize it better..

I made a crude sketch of the areas I'm referencing. Some of the anatomy-savvy people might have better input.

kizupixels

Wow thank you so much!
I tried to work on the pants as you said, I'll work on the abs tomorrow

kizupixels

Today progress :>
Thanks for watching ! 

kizupixels

Alright so after retopologing everything, uv's and vray light I finished this :]


Thanks guys! 

Brian "Panda" Choi

Do you have any more time to polish this?

kizupixels

Well I submited it so not for school but if you have some improvement to tell me I can work on them for my portfolio :} 

Brian "Panda" Choi

If you just have turnarounds of the character, that would interest me the most.  Face included.