chizuru / 2000's samurai girl

dnhart13

Halo !
My names Chris. im from Indonesia.
I need some feedback on my newest artwork. 
somehow i feel a bit odd, but i didnt really know what...

i did this artwork just for fun and to learn female anatomy.
currently i didnt want to do any retopologize, just focus on my sculpt.
heres my wip. zbrush, blender for some armor.





Thank you for any feedback. Thanks.

carvuliero

Pretty good try , gesture look solid but there are few areas that mess the whole thing up

Most obvious knee in wrong in all views -> check how sartorius and biceps femoris connect to lower leg + lower portion of vastus leteralist  and medialis are on a same level -> check how they connect to patella  .Back lack volume ->probably whole rib cage is not quire right , scapula spine is not straight , back of arm connection to the body forms are not glue together as you have them there is space and deep fold between arm and body + latissimus dorsi and teres major have to pass under the arm  also volume of both muscle is not indicate on the side view , in this pose deltoid should have bulge on the top , does you model really have such big upper arms and inner thighs ? ,there is some very mysterious fold below her butt , some of medial portion of soleus is missing

You should post side view without prospective next time

dnhart13

carvuliero said:

Pretty good try , gesture look solid but there are few areas that mess the whole thing up

Most obvious knee in wrong in all views -> check how sartorius and biceps femoris connect to lower leg + lower portion of vastus leteralist  and medialis are on a same level -> check how they connect to patella  .Back lack volume ->probably whole rib cage is not quire right , scapula spine is not straight , back of arm connection to the body forms are not glue together as you have them there is space and deep fold between arm and body + latissimus dorsi and teres major have to pass under the arm  also volume of both muscle is not indicate on the side view , in this pose deltoid should have bulge on the top , does you model really have such big upper arms and inner thighs ? ,there is some very mysterious fold below her butt , some of medial portion of soleus is missing

You should post side view without prospective next time

Hi.. thank you for your feedback... ill check it... its hard to find good references...