3D Character : need critic and feeback

QuentinMalroux · May 2018

Hey,

I finish my studies soon, and i want to polish my last work,

so if you can help me make my character better, with better rendering.

Tanks you all !

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kanga · May 2018

The character looks great! Is he missing eyeballs though? The top renders are kind of confusing to look at. Check out how characters are presented here on Polycount and choose the best examples as a lead.

David-J · May 2018

Looks good but in my opinion before we even talk about rendering you can improve your textures a lot. It lacks material definition, color contrast and focus, some story telling details on the textures, also your skin texture needs a lot of work.
Work on those things alone and your character will improve a lot.

Ged · May 2018

good work! the material on his hood looks super thin, like toilet paper thin. Try adding some more depth to that part or at least make it look like the edges near his face arent disintegrating

3D Character : need critic and feeback

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