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AliArto
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AliArto polycounter lvl 4
after study gesture drawing past 3\2 days this my latest sculpt figure study 
i miss a lot of information about figure what i miss ? what i need 
and how to improve my self to see refe forms ? 

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  • carvuliero
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    carvuliero hero character
    She look better then your previous studies for sure
    Scapula , belly and pubic area need more work planes doesn't look right to me and you definitely have to put some time in study legs as they are not to same level as the torso .Ecorche is something that could help you learn muscle origin/insertion , form and function which is essential for dynamic pose like this one .Major bonny landmarks is something else that is very helpful . Major fat pads , simplified version of each body part , planes of the body , there are a lot of thing that can help you improve
    You can use one trick out of chess : Grandmasters evaluate their board and ask them self which one is my worst piece [let say worst piece is their knight ] so how can I improve my knight position and they look for a way to improve and so on they go till all pieces are in perfect position which normally lead to victory . In your case legs look like the worst piece to me so you can immediately improve if you study legs 
    Why don't you post reference as well ?
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