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From the outset I want to apologize for my awkward English :)

For a long time I am drawing this concept, but I can't complete him. I need an unbiased view from the outside.

This is raven enchantress. I meant that this is a girl obsessed with the evil spirit of a raven (by analogy with the obsession with the devil)
This greatly exhausts her, as evidenced by emaciated leanness and slouch.
The dark spirit has not completely mastered her, so part of the torso and one arm are still human, and the other side is covered with black feathers.

The main guideline for the quality of work is this concept:

Main references:


Steps of work:


Issues:
1) Drawn a lot of elements, but they don't agree well with each other. The concept looks unfinished and scattered.
On the concept chosen for guideline the number of elements is about the same (or even slightly less) but they are much better consistent among themselves.
I see for sure that in my art this integrity and coherence is not present but I don't understand because of what and how to fix it.

2) I'm not sure about the idea with the staff. Variant with a crow's head on top of a stick - this is very trivially, depicted in hundreds of other concepts.
Nest on a curved snag seems a little strange idea :) It is intended that in it live "black nestlings".
Enchantress can attack the player with their help (by analogy with the film "The Birds" Hitchcock)

3) All elements seem very similar, I would like to diversify them  but not to the detriment of the integrity of the whole concept (with her and so many problems)
I have several ideas on this, I wonder what you think about them:


I really hope for your comments and help!

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