Sci-fi Backpack [WIP]

IgorSilva · Apr 2018

Hello guys,
I want to share my process in this backpack.
I'm finished my Highpoly starting now the low poly
C&C are very welcome

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Concept by Rock D
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/VQQAg

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Carabiner · Apr 2018

Hey there - your highpoly is looking nice and clean, very good work on that. I think my biggest thought is, are you trying to emulate the chunky playful style of the concept? If so, I think you could loosen up your bevels overall especially on places like this:

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There's also a lot you could do with the bottom part to make it more playful, and some proportions are off there too -- the metal pieces on each side are too wide in yours compared to the concept, and the indented rectangles could be a lot more pronounced and more offset. I think it really just depends on the style you're going for.