The Inspector - Critique Welcome

MHilt

Hey all,

Here is a character I'm working on for my portfolio. Here's a recent screenshot of the hi-poly. I'm in the process of reworking and splitting the hard surface elements up then I'll move on to retopology for final detail and polish. Hair is also being reworked and split up into separate subtools to help with the soft transition between each major section of hair. Critique is very welcome.



Early sketches for the character concept as well as pose/silhouette. 

Brian "Panda" Choi

Rotate his palms so it's facing down towards the floor.  They're currently not in as neutral of a position as they can be.  Will make your rigger and animator happier.

MHilt

Will do, thanks for the critique.

MHilt

I finally got around to finishing up this guy, free time for personal work has been scarce. Critiques are very much welcome!

MHilt

Keyshot renders 

MHilt

Finally got around to finishing this guy, free time for personal work has been scarce.

duplicateaccount

i LIKE THIS CHARACTER, VERY WELL DESIGNED! The only thing I would say is I would like to see more of the Yellow energy light thing built into his robotic arm, I see the 3 little ones but it doesn't feel enough to me. Maybe enlarge those or add more?  just a thought

Kgizzi

Really like the stylization man, nice work. What material are you using in Keyshot? Looks sweet

MHilt

3DKlassen said:

i LIKE THIS CHARACTER, VERY WELL DESIGNED! The only thing I would say is I would like to see more of the Yellow energy light thing built into his robotic arm, I see the 3 little ones but it doesn't feel enough to me. Maybe enlarge those or add more?  just a thought

Thanks! I appreciate the critique. I thought about adding some extra atmospheric particle cards to help bring focus to those areas, maybe some volumetric lights coming from those light sources. Maybe eventually.

Kgizzi said:

Really like the stylization man, nice work. What material are you using in Keyshot? Looks sweet

Thanks a lot. The material is called Orange plastic Black & Decker. Just edited the diffuse, roughness and refraction. Also has a very subtle AO pass overlayed at low opacity in PS.

Avenger84

really nice

wirrexx

He reminds me of Sir Reginald from Umbrella Academy! love it

goekbenjamin

great work, love that style!