Nice work Alvaro, hair looks beautiful, I'd add a little more volume to the ponytail and scale up that bow, other than that I think you are super close to the concept!
Love the overall design but somethin really bugs me about her face, eyes to be precise. On close up her face is quite, yet on full body shot it looks creepy; maybe try to pronounce eyelashes more, add tearline to blend eyes in and rework eye shader?
Thanks for the feedback guys,tried to work on it and made some more tweaks to the textures. I added an AO ring on the eyes and made the pupil just a bit bigger so hopefully thats looking better now. I think im done with the textures unless there is any other feedback.
Great model! I think you could have pushed the roughness some more, and some subtle gradients or color variation. But I do understand if you wanted to stick to the concept more closely.
Hi! I like the model, looking good! I do think the color are a little bit too desaturated/faded. I think you could bring a lot more life and punch into this character by reworking the color slightly and making the lighting less flat.
@Tits Thank you for the feedback, i might come back to this project in the future, but for now i will try to apply this feedback to future projects, thanks!
Hi, just to be fair, the concept itself is very under saturated. So I guess it makes sense after all not to go very far with the overall saturation. One thing that catches my eye though is the skin shader: it doesn't look very fleshy. If I were you, I'd work on that. I thing a little bit of SSS might bring the piece more to life.
Anyway, nice model. I really like how tidy it looks!
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Other things look great though.
I like the model, looking good!
I do think the color are a little bit too desaturated/faded. I think you could bring a lot more life and punch into this character by reworking the color slightly and making the lighting less flat.
just to be fair, the concept itself is very under saturated. So I guess it makes sense after all not to go very far with the overall saturation.
One thing that catches my eye though is the skin shader: it doesn't look very fleshy. If I were you, I'd work on that. I thing a little bit of SSS might bring the piece more to life.
Anyway, nice model. I really like how tidy it looks!