Updating my portfolio after years [Looking for feedback]

repstyle

Hi there

I am going to update my current portfolio in order to get hired or do some freelance job.
I will use this thread to show what picture i am going to use and get feedback in order to improve the pictures or to get rid of it.

Here the 1st one :

BANSVENO

Hey! I don't know what kind of style you're going after, but you could improve your lighting, colour hue shifts and illustration mood, bring it more to life with simple rendering, search for some rendering tutorials on youtube , they are super helpful!  

Nexam

First we need to know is what you are aiming for ? what kind of job ?
With one picture it's hard to get a clear idea.
Like Bansveno said, even if you go for a "comic" style, you can improve your lighting/rendering