Personal project_01

Stuart

Hello! My name is stuart and I am a student at abertay. I Started this project and just wanted to put it out there and maybe get feedback along the road.

So far i've sized everything in max and just started sculpting the scene. ( This isnt the final design)

Stuart

This is the style Im going for.

Stuart

Another model. with paintover.

Stuart

Another piece. The floor. If My sculpts look messy or are just bad, please give me feedback! Id really appreciate it. Thanks 

Stuart

Started a few practice bakes, Been a while since Ive baked    If anyone has anything to point out im all ears! 

wirrexx

Looking good, keep at it!

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material testing

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Looking for advice on this sculpt, I think the damage is bit big but maybe not? Thanks

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little update

Peter_tran

This is amazing! What are your inspirations/references? I can definitely see a very blizzard - ish style (Overwatch, WoW). If this is what you're going after, you might want to lower down the details of the normals in your materials. In your material testing, in the third screenshot ( forest) you can see clearly the tiny bumps on the rocks. In my opinion, it won't work that well with this style. Other then that, this is crazy good! Looking forward to your progression. 

Stuart

Peter_tran said:

This is amazing! What are your inspirations/references? I can definitely see a very blizzard - ish style (Overwatch, WoW). If this is what you're going after, you might want to lower down the details of the normals in your materials. In your material testing, in the third screenshot ( forest) you can see clearly the tiny bumps on the rocks. In my opinion, it won't work that well with this style. Other then that, this is crazy good! Looking forward to your progression. 

Hi and thanks for the kind words, Honestly i haven't been sculpting styled very long but from doing a bit of research l think my sculpts are a bit to full  of unneeded detail? I dunno really.  I prefer realism but this is just a little bit of fun. 

Need to redesign the door and few other pieces,  also work on some foliage to hide my faults!  

Nars

Hello, are you following a concept? i would be interested seeing it .
Your sculpts look great imo.

Peter_tran

Hi and thanks for the kind words, Honestly i haven't been sculpting styled very long but from doing a bit of research l think my sculpts are a bit to full  of unneeded detail? I dunno really.  I prefer realism but this is just a little bit of fun.

Personally, the details from your sculpting are fine. Maybe tone down a little the areas I circled in red? It's more about tiny realist details from your materials that bothers me a little. I would go all the way stylised. Just my two cents though! Cheers!

Stuart

textured rail, 

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little update

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Anyone got advice before i bake this down? Advice always welcomed  

Stuart

Heyo! I just did a quick paint-over before class, and its very scruffy. hopefully it gives the point across of being old abandoned broken side etc etc. If anyone had advice on composition id love to hear. 
 I just have to model the door maybe a different floor tile. I've learnt a lot so far about destruction in sculpts. I defiantly went to far in some of the models with cracks and dent. Maybe i still am? I'm trying to go a moderately styled theme. I also created a new smart material hopefully it gives off a styled feeling. A lot of this is new to me so i really would appreciate any advice !  

Stuart

Maxilator

Looks very solid, cant really come up with anything to crit, I'll be interested to see how it comes along. 

Stuart

decided to up the  damage 

wirrexx

Following

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wirrexx said:

Following

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Stuart

Hello  

Before i bake these down I would love some feedback, I've been staring at these sculpts for hours and stuff starts to all look the same I even took a break and found it hard to come back and create the same style on the left pillar, I guess its just a practicing thing. I might introduce a bit of cracks to the rail or even leave this one as a slightly less damaged one and use the damaged one in the broken wall part of the env. Please be as honest as and critical! I can take it   

Stuart

Started texturing   Need to work on the materials a bit still a bit glossy, any input would be helpful thnks all 

Stuart

Still need to work on the roughness but slowly in learning bit by bit Any feedback/ pointers  appreciated immensely!