Hey, this is pretty good! The only thing that bothers me is the expression. She kinda has the 1000 yard stare thing going on and it seems like her mouth is the only thing creating emotion.
solid work. a few things that could improve it further: - as Solid_Otter said, the expression is a little dead. I would close her eyes a little more, and add some more eyelid shadow...the lack of it often is the reason a character looks creepy.
- the spell effect on her hand looks a little cheap to be honest..I would work a little more on that.
- the hair looks a little bit too thin..
- Maybe you could try to give her hat a more distinct shape. Right now, you have a little wobbly shape. something like this maybe?! a tilted brim and a nice zig-zag shape of the hat could give some more shape and character keep going! cheers!
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- as Solid_Otter said, the expression is a little dead. I would close her eyes a little more, and add some more eyelid shadow...the lack of it often is the reason a character looks creepy.
- the spell effect on her hand looks a little cheap to be honest..I would work a little more on that.
- the hair looks a little bit too thin..
- Maybe you could try to give her hat a more distinct shape. Right now, you have a little wobbly shape.
something like this maybe?! a tilted brim and a nice zig-zag shape of the hat could give some more shape and character
cheers!