Hall of the Gods [Finished]

Holy crap the 1000 word count is a killer on this.  My own fault, but I think with all the ideas dropped and rewrites I cut out about 700 words.

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  • TeacupLemonade
    Hi! I just wanted to say that I really loved your submission. The unique take on Pantheon's past and the way you described his torturous climb up Mt. Targon was honestly captivating. The dialogue was snappy and full of personality and emotion. Keep up the good work, and I hope I get to read more of your work in the future!
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