[Riot Creative Contest 2017] Malzahar

rezahadilesmana

Hello, I am quite late to join the fun. I hope I can make it.

I choose Malzahar for my entry. Here is some draft. Still not sure which one I should use, so if you guys have any suggestions, that will really great!

Cavins

I like the face in B but the pose in A.  I think you should move him off to a side more, so he's not right in the middle.  In almost all of his splashes he's floating somewhat to the right.  Malz is my favorite champion so I'm excited to see more Good luck!

reyxcx

I think B is the best, I love it!

Innocent_Prime

Hi @rezahadilesmana !
Up to you,
A & B, are more impactful. If you simplify your drawing, it's a rectangle with a centered circle and a character in it, which looks like a flag or a logo. If you add some chaos around it would be an interesting composition.
C is nice too. Composition-wise it's the opposite of A&B, a base comp' playing on all axis with second role characters/objects going in one direction.
If i'm a bit sketchy in my explanation, please check Talon Bloodmoon VS Yasuo Nightbringer splashs.

I can see there is an empty space for a composition D, go for it!

rezahadilesmana

Thank you so much for your replies. Here is few more sketches and edit previous sketches a bit.

@Innocent_Prime Thank you so much for the very detailed comment. I've checked those two characters' splash screen, they're so epic!

Cavins

D has my vote!