[Riot Creative Contest 2017] Deathsworn Katarina!

jeck24

Edited: Hi guys, my name is Jeck (Jerico is my real name tho)! Im joining the contest. Final piece is at the bottom part~

DavideScalia

hey, keep it up you can do it! the image has a good composition but you should put some kind foreground element, otherwise it may result flat as there are just two planes right now

jeck24

DavideScalia said:

hey, keep it up you can do it! the image has a good composition but you should put some kind foreground element, otherwise it may result flat as there are just two planes right now

Thank you for pointing out! I will do what you said

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jeck24

had to go to school today so only minor changes in face and hair and other stuff in this update. 

Flamoespoes

Love how you did the sword effects. I think the hair is too "ragged and worn" looking because of all the sharp edges in her fringe. If you did less sharp edges, make it one long lock of hair, it would give her a more feminine and softer look! Keep it up, looks awesome so far!

RaivynMoon

I think her hair looks a bit too much like Dawnbringer Riven's on the areas closer to her scalp. I agree with Flamoespoes, the sharp edges aren't helping, Katarina's hair should look more ethereal here, kinda like floating around. Everything else looks pretty amazing so far! I hope this helps, and I wish you good luck!

jeck24

Flamoespoes said:

Love how you did the sword effects. I think the hair is too "ragged and worn" looking because of all the sharp edges in her fringe. If you did less sharp edges, make it one long lock of hair, it would give her a more feminine and softer look! Keep it up, looks awesome so far!

RaivynMoon said:

I think her hair looks a bit too much like Dawnbringer Riven's on the areas closer to her scalp. I agree with Flamoespoes, the sharp edges aren't helping, Katarina's hair should look more ethereal here, kinda like floating around. Everything else looks pretty amazing so far! I hope this helps, and I wish you good luck!

Thank you for the critique and compliment. I definitely agree that it should look more ethereal and that the fringes are not working. both of you are great help! i will make changes

jeck24

update:

fixing some stuff at the moment

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update:

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Final:
Im just glad i finished this. It was quite a struggle. I should practice more!