Really good. Exactly how it should be, but it could have the 'little more' Maybe do the tactical light with a darker diffuse, its a bit very medium tone all around. The grip could also have some brighter slightly worn down areas, even if its just a minimal roughness change.
The thing I dislike is the flashlight text, poor font and the X3M is too big, leaving no space around it. Get something more "Logo", and put a bright neon color like yellow to give a bit of a colored accent, which you repeat on the sights with luminescent dots. (In general you want to use any highlight color at least twice)
You can also do more with the background (and there is always room for better lighting), something subtle with a center focus in brightness. Remember, youre an Artist, not a factory worker. Even if you don't feel like it, sell yourself as one, youre doing an artwork, present it as such.
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Maybe do the tactical light with a darker diffuse, its a bit very medium tone all around.
The grip could also have some brighter slightly worn down areas, even if its just a minimal roughness change.
The thing I dislike is the flashlight text, poor font and the X3M is too big, leaving no space around it. Get something more "Logo", and put a bright neon color like yellow to give a bit of a colored accent, which you repeat on the sights with luminescent dots. (In general you want to use any highlight color at least twice)
You can also do more with the background (and there is always room for better lighting), something subtle with a center focus in brightness. Remember, youre an Artist, not a factory worker. Even if you don't feel like it, sell yourself as one, youre doing an artwork, present it as such.