Check this out and feel the horror 8D

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give tips and crits  

this is my sweet blood thirsty Lycan
i love making monsters



after doing some idiot effects its like this --->



my first time here

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i need motivation to develop my self

Zalek4

Heya!

I would say you should work on better presentation of the model. I understand the whole "shadow on one side of the face makes him scary" idea for the kind of creature it is, but the white background with the single scene light ruins it. 

I think the folks who worked on 'The Order: 1886' did a pretty good job of presenting your particular monster:



Dark backgrounds can make dark colored items/characters look like they belong there, even if it's just a flat color.

We can give better critiques if we can see your model properly as well.

Hope I helped! Cheers!

MTDues

Zalek4 said:

Heya!

I would say you should work on better presentation of the model. I understand the whole "shadow on one side of the face makes him scary" idea for the kind of creature it is, but the white background with the single scene light ruins it. 

I think the folks who worked on 'The Order: 1886' did a pretty good job of presenting your particular monster:



Dark backgrounds can make dark colored items/characters look like they belong there, even if it's just a flat color.

We can give better critiques if we can see your model properly as well.

Hope I helped! Cheers!

i will add that to the list thx , i will focus on the presentation and lighting the scene with the right colors

Brian "Panda" Choi

Do you have turnaround of the model in more even studio lighting?  Hard to give feedback with the dramatic set up.

MTDues

Brian "Panda" Choi said:

Do you have turnaround of the model in more even studio lighting?  Hard to give feedback with the dramatic set up.

alright here you go

Brian "Panda" Choi

Please don't take camera photos of your screen.  You have better options to take screenshots instead of digital on digital.

Either PrntScrn button on your keyboard, and paste the image into an image program of your choice.
Or use the Windows Snipping tool.

And by turn around, we mean more even angles, like front, back, side , three-quarters, etc.  Harsh horror lighting won't be good for peer-to-peer evaluations.

Something like this:

MTDues

Brian "Panda" Choi said:

Please don't take camera photos of your screen.  You have better options to take screenshots instead of digital on digital.

Either PrntScrn button on your keyboard, and paste the image into an image program of your choice.
Or use the Windows Snipping tool.

And by turn around, we mean more even angles, like front, back, side , three-quarters, etc.  Harsh horror lighting won't be good for peer-to-peer evaluations.

Something like this:

well, im defintly gonna take this in concern  ty

and i hope u liked the idea regardless the low resolution

Brian "Panda" Choi

I didn't like the idea, unfortunately.