[Riot Art Contest 2017] camille : the secret service

hon87

hello, my name is henry
and on this contest i just decided to pick carmille for my illustration entry, coz i really love her design
for the start, i sketch 4 different pose. and maybe i would take a reference from kingsman : the secret service for carmille's costume.
on my early sketch, i still use her original design coz i am so sleepy right now and my brain does not work properly.
carmille's costume design will follow soon. thank you

RV_

Looks good ! Reminds me a bit of Beifong in Legend of Kora. I love her position on the third one.

hon87

RV_ said:

Looks good ! Reminds me a bit of Beifong in Legend of Kora. I love her position on the third one.

thanks !

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my next progress
using 3d model from lolking and
make 3 alternatives costume design from it

4paulpaa

third is the best I think

hon87

next progress,
looking for the color mood based on the chosen pose
first image, would be on random bar
2nd image, would be on alley

RV_

Both are great ! I have a slight preference for the first, i can totally see shards of glass scattering cuz she just broke through the window to arrest some dude in that bar. It can be a young camille, but i think she miss some sharpness in her face.

Skyzocat

I really like her hairstyle and her costume!!  Both poses are great, my only concern would be the perspective of the legs in the 2nd because they feel a little bit short to me.
If it is coming at us, mybe exagerating a little bit the anatomy of the legs to make it longer + making it exceed the frame could be nice! Hope it helps

hon87

RV_ said:

Both are great ! I have a slight preference for the first, i can totally see shards of glass scattering cuz she just broke through the window to arrest some dude in that bar. It can be a young camille, but i think she miss some sharpness in her face.

gee thank you for your feedback

Skyzocat said:

I really like her hairstyle and her costume!!  Both poses are great, my only concern would be the perspective of the legs in the 2nd because they feel a little bit short to me.
If it is coming at us, mybe exagerating a little bit the anatomy of the legs to make it longer + making it exceed the frame could be nice! Hope it helps

wow thank you so much for the fix, yes i thought that something was a bit off. i really appreciate it

hon87

slow progress with some feedbacks from friends and fellow polycount members
i think i will continue the progress for the blue mood one; and think whether i finish both of the illustration or not

hon87

next progress
change the face and hair, and continue on the other parts of the character. doing some details on the costume and legs

hon87

progress continue, polish the character and start to make the background

FrancoDraws

looks fantastic so far!  I'm learning a lot from your techniques!

hon87

my final 
i think this is my final progress

hon87

FrancoDraws said:

looks fantastic so far!  I'm learning a lot from your techniques!

thanks!!

Supradip

Wow! looking awesome