[Riot Creative Contest 2017] - Celine

Celine_Pak

Hello everyone.

My name is Celine Pak. I am new to VFX industry and 
I'd like to participate in Riot VFX contest and I want to share my WIP stylized ice effect.
I have been working on this last three weeks on my free time and I still think there are a lot to polish and any kind of feedback will be very appreciated.
I will keep posting my WIP.

Thank you.


Here is my WIP video.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ULoSLvDPZRQ


This is early concept of my effect.

AntonioEffectsFX

Be careful about texturing that orb.

floorpeas

Ignore the above warning, the no texturing the orb rule is in regards to not lettings things detract from the effect. This is a shader effect to show the freeze ability and so is relevant to the piece.

I really love the idea of this effect. I think you need to play with the timings of things, such as the spawning of the snow flake. Currently its linearly growing which makes it feel even slower, I know its ice so you dont want things too snappy, however perhaps starting faster and slowing might be better?

Perhaps the ice spike is a little long? It feels very large in the scene compared to other elements at the moment.

The portal area probably needs another colour for contrast so it feels different to the snowflake pattern. This would help it read as a portal for the spike to come from?

Celine_Pak

Thank you for your feedback. I agree with those feedback and will post the update in few days. 

Celine_Pak

This is my second version of WIP. any kind of feedback is welcome!! Happy new Year. !
https://youtu.be/fltqRYl7cfc

parag

I liked the smaller snowflakes in first version. They felt a lil more natural.
Nice work
Looking forward for next update

Celine_Pak

Hello.
This is my another idea for contest.
The theme of my effect is Project Orianna's Q,W and R combo.
It is still very early.

This is my early concept.


https://youtu.be/zR2Tq8FuxgE

Celine_Pak

parag said:

I liked the smaller snowflakes in first version. They felt a lil more natural.
Nice work
Looking forward for next update

Thank you for feedback. I agree with your feedback.
I think the background changed intensity of snowflakes, I will tone it down and will update video soon.

Thank you

Celine_Pak

Hello. 
This is my Project Orianna's Q,W and R 2nd WIP.
https://youtu.be/zHmPKxO5VRI

Celine_Pak

The Final Version of Ice Spear and Project Orianna. 


Ice Spear (Side, Top and Beauty Shot)
https://youtu.be/2p-ONJZHA_k

Project Orianna's Q,W and R (Side, Top and Beauty Shot)
https://youtu.be/pmPDvShzZXY