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[WIP] Time to Reflect

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A post to keep track of work done on my entry for the 2017 Creative Contest, thank you for taking time to look.

Day 1: Deciding a champ to write about. As suggested by my husband, played a game of ARAM and chose the first champ I played as; Morgana. Looking at what little there is to her lore, I have quite a bit to work with here so ideas are flowing.

Progress: Dissecting her and Kayle's lore. Finding out there is very little to work with. There seems to be a few inconsistencies or just blank spots, but it shouldn't matter much for the idea I have settled on. From my interpretation of their lore, after growing in the dark arts Morgana challenges Kayle to a literal battle, but loses to her. I decided to write on Morgana after her loss to Kayle. I'm still unsure if I am following along with what they intended with their lore, but I think it's vague enough for artist license.

Started my topic and officially entering this contest I suppose. Settling into the idea more and being confident in it. Morgana has lost and was thrown from her home planet to land in Runeterra; injured, alone, and very upset. Since her relationship with Kayle seems key to their lore I am focusing on her feelings about facing her and losing to her. Time to work on a first draft.

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    Update; have a first draft. Some parts are great, others need lots of work. Will probably start over for a second draft so not planning on posting it unless anyone is interested (or I need to for the contest).
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    Finished the second draft, half written at 2 AM and the other at a more reasonable time. There's parts of both that I like and dislike so time to go through to edit, combine, hack out, and decide what's best for my piece. Sending to a few friends for advice as well, writers and gamers. Attached her for anyone interested.

    In trying to portray Morgana, I've focused on her anger at her people and specifically Kayle. She has a lot to be upset about and this takes place directly after challenging Kayle and being defeated, being flung to Runeterrra. She's not weak though, as shown through her dark magic use which I also use to help in further expressing her feelings. I think I just need to brush up some grammar, writing style, and overuse of some words. Need a thesaurus :P
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    Finally getting to some editing. First step was to fix "Draft" in the title.

    Taking bits and pieces of both drafts, mostly sticking with the first one. Highlighting parts I liked and didn't like. Mostly word usage that I'm tweaking since writing isn't a full time job for me. Any advice would be appreciated, but I know this is a contest too. Just updating the thread for posterity.
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    Well, after putting off editing for as long as I could, finally bit the bullet and made changes. Took pieces of both, mashed them together, and came out with something I feel is the best of the work I've done on this. I attached the final draft here and will be submitting it to the official submitting places soon. It's been a fun experience, even if I don't place. Hoping this helps me learn for my future writing projects
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