[RIOT CREATIVE CONTEST 2017] Character Art -Pharaoh Ahri

OlaGhazali

Hello, everyone! My name is Ola, here is my entry

i hope i can finish it before the end

so i decided to design a skin for Ahri, not my favorite champ to play against

I decided to give her a pharaoh skin

As you know Pharaohs' gods where known to be half human and half animal, so I thought what if Ahri was a Goddess in pharaoh history

OK that's my idea, here some of my early tries to design her, I think I'll try more with E example I loved it more than the others

any comment or critique are welcomed

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 my References

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my first try

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other tries https://imgur.com/Djwh8uW

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now i will start Modelling

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Sculpting WIP, any c&c are welcomed

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did a little on hair and crown

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next I'm going to work on the tails then trying some colors before retopology

theStoff

Hey there you seem to be making a lot of progress! I was just looking through the images and thought of a few things that could help. First I'm finding it a little strange that the cloth wraps around the butt. I'd expect the cloth to drop down from the furthest point out. I was also wondering if you were targeting the League style since the hair is a little busy in comparison. Most league characters have larger shapes for the hair. I'd also suggest having the hair flow around the ears. Lastly I'm noticing the elbows are a bit high. Well that's about all the cents I have right now . Keep at it! 

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theStoff said:

Hey there you seem to be making a lot of progress! I was just looking through the images and thought of a few things that could help. First I'm finding it a little strange that the cloth wraps around the butt. I'd expect the cloth to drop down from the furthest point out. I was also wondering if you were targeting the League style since the hair is a little busy in comparison. Most league characters have larger shapes for the hair. I'd also suggest having the hair flow around the ears. Lastly I'm noticing the elbows are a bit high. Well that's about all the cents I have right now . Keep at it! 

thank you for your feedback its really organised and constructive

I'll try to make the cloth to be in a better form and shape

I've noticed the problem with the elbows and fixed them

as for the hair I'll try to simplify it more

Thanks for your feedback again and please if you've any other comments i'll be greatful

OlaGhazali

Hello again,
here is my entry i will try to refine some colors and any c&c r welcome