Facial Topology requesting Critique and feedback please

JonBick0

Hello i am looking for a critique on my facial topology based on the character Guts from the berserk animated movies, 

im checking to see if im missing anything here in terms of the loops in major areas and how things shopuld connect to each other?

right now im just focusing on the front of the face

carvuliero

I would do orange and red bigger also edge from corner of the mouth aim mid ear 
You can keep purple mask or continue edge down its up to you 

JonBick0

Thanks for the help!

KingKellogg

That person nailed it..

Also, guts?

JonBick0

Yes it is based off the character of Guts from the manga Berserk.