Hey, it's starting to get there! The face though is still in my opinion very masculine. I think it's because of the chin being too angular, the edges below the eyes being too sharp, and the eybrows arch too big. The neck can be narrower, and the lips with a more feminine shape.The anatomy is cool but maybe a bit too exaggerated, I would personally smooth it out a bit, especially the 6pack and triceps areas.The armor parts and clothing looks great, your theme is really well translated into 3D!The hair is pretty cool too but a bit hard to read. I'd totally see a bith of cloth falling along the hair and bringing a soft spiral into them to break the shape.I did a quick PO to illustrate what I meant about the face, I hope you don't mind:Just my two cents ofc.I am really digging the idea, looking forward to see some colors.