WIP character

MamoruK · Nov 2017

been a really long time since I've modeled anything so posting the WIP here for some C&C. thanks everyone

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MamoruK · Nov 2017

Did a topo change on the face which should lend itself to better facilitate Normal manipulation later on. thoughts? left original right changed.

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MisterWolfen · Nov 2017

I want to give you feedback but you need to give me more stuff to go off, tag me when you've made more progress with the concept

jacopoS · Nov 2017

Hi,
I can give you some feedback on your last topology change:
the mouth area have improved a lot. Now you have the "smile line" that was missing before and the surrounding topology is a lot cleaner!
The inner eye area though is dirtier now. Here I've marked the areas I'm talking about:

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This is more like how I would go about it:

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I hope this helps you.
Cheers!

MamoruK · Nov 2017

Thanks @jacopoS i actually ended up making that change recently since it was giving me problems with the mesh bending. Ended up moving stuff around like you went with there. Will post updates soon.