Climbing scene

ikhaled0n

hey, here is a short climbing scene I've made for studying, keep in mind that it's my first time using a camera, lots of fun playing around with but certainly there is more technical advice I want to hear from you. 

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/198532#270747

pmiller001

woah, i like that camera work there. There seems to be a bit of jitteryness. Is that the model or the camera?

ikhaled0n

pmiller001 said:

woah, i like that camera work there. There seems to be a bit of jitteryness. Is that the model or the camera?

The camera i believe 

LloydHallam

From what I can tell, the animation looks good. But it's difficult to critique properly when the camera is moving. Moving camera shots aren't the best for animation unless it's absolutely necessary.

Einar

Hi, i've added some notes. You have some interesting body mechanics and i really enjoy the animation. I feel like you have used your reference very well. My notes are based around pushing the weight and getting away from that more referenced feel of the piece.

Important: I would like to add that in the future you should stay away from the camera handheld offsets when you are looking for reviews (AKA the camerashake). Put them on a layer on the camera and turn it off. The camera shakes makes it harder for me to notice where the weight problems are (But i still feel the problems)

ikhaled0n

i should turn off camera next time (y)



Einar - i really appreciate your notes, thank you