First 3D Model.

krazyDrazy

Hello everyone.. I've started working on Maya 10 days ago, I've been doing some exercises and this is the result after all that I've learned.. I accept criticism also I apreciate some guides or tutorials where I can learn more so I can make the next one better than this one.. 

jose.fuentes

first thing that stands out to me, is that the render is really dark.   I would add an some image based lighting and or more lights 

pmiller001

id try to make it look more like a real t.v. 

Brian "Panda" Choi

For the next project, I encourage you to take a look at this.  This will REALLY change how you think  about modeling in Maya:
https://www.dropbox.com/home/Public/PassiveHost?preview=Straight+to+High+Poly+Modeling+BrianPandaChoi.docx

carvuliero

Great work krazyDrazy remind me of my first model 
I will suggest you to pick something with blueprint out of subject you are most passionate about . Pick something complex this way you are going to learn a lot and fast 
Small example below(blueprint) :

krazyDrazy

Thanks guys anyway I was doing some random stuff, I was learning about edges and vertex and all that extrude stuff so I said let's try hit something.. Also I want to model organic not that I don't like hard surfaces but Im more interested in organic.

carvuliero

Then better learn Zbrush or any other sculpting software , you can still do organic modeling in maya but is slow and tedious at least for me 

krazyDrazy

Okay guys I've done some rework.. I was working 8 hours on this one and I hope you like it.

Elithenia

looking much better!

CybranM

Thats a massive improvement, nice job

jose.fuentes

much better!

I agree with @carvuliero, choosing a scene like he posted will help a lot, that way you have great reference on what to match 

also @Brian "Panda" Choi  your dropbox link doesnt work, im curious to read your doc.