Walkcycle - feedback

NuttyART

Hello.
Recently I gave my best at animating walkcycle. As usually please give me any feedback!


https://syncsketch.com/playground/bad0b9f1a3d646bb899d301edca1006e#256779 front view
https://syncsketch.com/playground/f63785845c8c4005a00a7d08c2983a50#256783 side view

Arturow

left you very little notes ,it looks so cool!! its Mumei from the iron fortress right? hahah :P

NuttyART

Arturow said:

left you very little notes ,it looks so cool!! its Mumei from the iron fortress right? hahah :P

Thank you for your feedback Arturow. I tried to fix the things which you have mentioned. 
https://syncsketch.com/playground/65951815e2f5484787ffd4f7d3c893fb#275950
https://syncsketch.com/playground/00c336b024e942ff90b45745192b75c6#275951

Yes, it's Mumei from the iron fortess, if you're interested at the model, I'm gonna send the rigged version to the creator of the character, so anybody will be able to get it for 5$. Character is rigged with the newest blenrig but to be honest, I woudn't rig that model for the second time. I thought that I'll cover most of my reel with this character but while animating  I found out that she has a very long, unproportional legs thus it's hard to find for her proper center of gravity. 
https://gumroad.com/ucup